Tell me again how the flame in your heart
Flares up when before me you kneel
To declare your love in this old-fashioned way,
Am I dreaming, or is this real?
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Your Poemhunters answer to Fifty Shades of Grey! You and Val Doren should get together, you'd go down a storm! WELL DONE.
I am speechless, marveling at the beauty of this beautiful piece. A great poet you are, Lora.
sometimes I think I am thats what love does to us beautiful
Tell me again how my love holds you captive - A prisoner loving the ordeal the way you finely weave the picture in these lines is amazing.
This is lovely Lora, and extremely well written - love the rhyme scheme.
You capture the dream of love magnificently.