Monday, July 9, 2018

Am I Dead To Your Heart My Fearsome Queen Comments

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Am I dead to your heart, my fearsome queen,  
will these battle scars heal without a trace?  
I fought thy wars more years of pain await 
to wake me from this nightmare that I dream. 
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Kostas Lagos 11 July 2018

What a fantastic poem! A love unanswered! Great.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 July 2018

A poignant piece of work. A poem of love that depicts loneliness of the heart.The feeling of being completely and desperately in love with someone yet never reciprocated. Brilliantly penned. Loved reading it.10+++++

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Captain Cur 10 July 2018

Thank you Rose Marie for such an inspiring comment about a desperate love poem. Ah! The Queen, beautiful but cold as ice. Perhaps one day my letters of love shall thaw her heart!

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