Monday, March 2, 2009

Am I Being Played? Comments

Rating: 5.0

At first glance, I am the sophisticated one
But I have became one out of necessity
I want to more than survive, to more than prevail
I just want to be.
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June FeirCruz
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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

I know Barbara well..I guess she says it all soo well...I v been through some tough days too..so i kniw the emotions too..very well crafted words..well quilled...i mean well penned...in ancint times wrote in feathers..so cool...10++

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Les Derbyshire 30 March 2009

I was held by this poem - compelled to read to the end. It is powerful and sensitive at the same time. The assymetric form serves to emphasise the emotions pulling in many directions. Thank you, as ever June!

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