Am I Alone? ? Comments

great rhyme.......nice message liked it :)

I can't tell your trying when your writing, but you are trying too hard and not focusing on what you want to say. Poems aren't all about rhyming. Rhyming with words that you dont really think fit with your poem but put it in anyways so it rhymes kills the poem and that is my advice.

I could say the beautiful words as the other people say to you, but I have a news for you, you have to be here on this Earth for some time. Only those die who have nothing to do anymore and they are not able to learn anymore. I said: Life is a school room, where we get lessons what we have to solve. There is no good or bad, there are challenges. Always hope in the best, but take what comes, do your best to dwell on beauty and harmony, ignore the khaos and sooner or later your life will turn into that. Wishing you well always. I still do not know who you are: a boy or a girl?

the grim reaper in an extreme portrayal.... done well :) tc

A lot of emotion I felt.and the most sorrowful part the is the loneliness Great job

Good idea, nice tones, beautiful write all you done here...and u not alone but God and others_Unwritten Soul