Sunday, May 4, 2008

Am I A Your Rag Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is wrong with you people
Why do you have to keep talking to me
Can you not see that I am doing my own thing
When you are heard I am unclear
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Great poem. Short and it has a good point that was made. Great Job

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Marvin Brato 22 May 2008

Doing our own thing, is a right not a privilege! A 10.

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~ Jon London ~ 06 May 2008

Lots of emotion, I Like this... (not your hearts mop) great line.. great poem best wishes Jon

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