Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Am I A Poet Comments

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Someone asked me, “Are you a poet? ”
I didn’t reply, just a smile,
In return I got one’s laughter,
I regretted my smile.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2015

Just a smile; because, poets are in many forms! Nice work.

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Valsa George 25 June 2015

Akhtar ji..... I didn't understand the poem really! Did he ask that question with scorn or was it a question hurled at you to offend you? The question as such is an innocent one, but the tone is more important here!

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Akhtar Jawad 25 June 2015

My superego says to me, I am just wasting my time in writing poems, in fact I can never be a good poet. That brings tears in my eyes and then I write a poem that is better than my most of the poems.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 June 2015

Despite my all efforts I could not write a poem that could really make me a poet but sometimes when tears come in my eyes due to my failures I write a few better poems. That's what my superego says to my ego.

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Khalid Saifullah 23 June 2015

A beautiful short poem....................10

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