Perhaps I am
Alone with an untouchable
And untainted voice in me
That speaks through my poems...
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Your poems are of high-yield variety appreciated very much by the field. The seed never the right judge for its yield. Your poems make a lot of difference for all those who read. Keep sowing the seeds.
Dinesh, very thoughtfully expressed insight into the world of lies. You see through the illusions people like to cloud the truth with and go straight to the heart of the matter. For this I greatly respect you, there is a sensitivity about you, that enables you to speak for those who don't know how to express themselves. Great poem! Thank you, RoseAnn
Whether I am right or wrong is beyond my comprehension but the inference drawn from this very outstanding piece brings basics that after selflessly nurturing seeds and seeing them growing into trees, one's labour going fruitless is quite painful and injudicious. Indeed you are very outspoken and a person upright. For this touching piece my regards for you doubly increased.......and for exquisite sensibility this piece deserves 10/10
With your courage and talent you express with great insight your intense observations in a world that likes to hide the truth!
Oh, your poetry never weeps like a 'dumb' child, but cries like a 'clever' baby who proclaims to the world that it is hungry and has to be appeased! 'Behind my lines hide Perhaps a few words spoken for some of you Who have never broken the shell And I am there as your mouthpiece.... ' This stanza perhaps summarizes your self undertaken task to be a mouthpiece for many who feel ill at ease with the mounting corruption, injustice and disparity, but who do not have words or courage to express them! Great write!
opening the door to something unseen, that's what a poet does always.
Nice well penned, a mouthpiece can be used as an earphone life through poetry and poetry through thelife thank you
a beautiful write. very true, very few people have the guts to break through their shells