Wednesday, August 3, 2005

Am I? Comments

Rating: 3.5

Feeling rage
Want a change
Came here and went there
Wasted my time and energy
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Konjit Berhane
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

A nice rhyme, love it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 April 2008

well written..........and good effort

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Herbert Nehrlich1 07 August 2005

Probably not, but your writing style wil only improve if you practice. I wopuld suggest you start with rhyming poems. H

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