Friday, March 30, 2018

Am I Comments

Rating: 5.0

I
Came
Upon a
Weathered
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Doris Cornago
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Nudershada Cabanes 01 April 2018

A perceptive poem well executed.10

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Mark Lambert 31 March 2018

Steel portal of my mind’s eye: This reminds me of both the pursuits of reason and the promise of seeing the world in new ways in the very near future. :) Love it, Doris. Thank you!

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deborrahcornago 31 March 2018

You are the hope of the future, a forward-thinking man; if it so happens that the wood should give way, find a way to pursue reason and keep seeing the future with your Avatar. :)

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Doris Cornago 30 March 2018

I am not my fragile body which weakens and withers away with time; I am my steel mind which is separate from my body, totally and firmly functional. So shall I be till daylight breaks and I am renewed in my resurrection. This is my perception.

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Doris Cornago 30 March 2018

Photo courtesy of Mark Lambert a.k.a.King of the Alley Cats. Says Mark of the poem, that sounds extremely close to how i imagine my existence. Aren't we all just being weathered by time, holding fast to what might be a not so glorious existence?

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