Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Am Bleeding Comments

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It’s so tiny but thirst for you,
Whilst thirsting comes with you
You need to be sustained. Just like tree you
Need to be watered. Natured.
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

Love and pain! ! But, hope still lies ahead of you. Be strong and, move on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2016

The bleeding, the consequence of the Tiny thirsty heart. It’s bigger than the future, I can wait and still stay happy. Pain, suffering. emotional problems and pain that is attached to it. very well expressed poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 November 2015

So nice. Pain is dripping thick and fast from lines. Keep inking.

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Mercy Kihu 20 November 2015

thank you anir. much appreciation

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