Friday, May 27, 2005
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searches the outline of her shadow
on a sizzling jungle gym blacktop
where a highway friend
zipped in and out of focus
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Keith Gaboury
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7/25/2025 8:14:10 AM # 1.0.0
Keith...your language is natural and 'unpoetic' which is good. Don't get tainted by all the 'poetry' on this website. I like this piece a lot. You'll be a fine poet if you keep working at it. I recommend that you read some Philip Levine on this site and try extending your narratives, as he does.