Saturday, January 29, 2011

Always With You Comments

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I never really saw what you feel for me
Love in your eyes, your feelings so true...
Never really cared when you came to me
Looked in my eyes and said 'I love you'...
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Rohit Sharma
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Jenny Gordon 30 January 2011

It is sweet, and spoken in such a soft, tender tone of something very like contrite humility and delightfully fervent affection....so very endearing, as all your poetry is. So comforting, since the heart ever wishes that reassurance that the beloved will never depart forever. I enjoyed it, and it provokes a soft smile, for the sweet love it contains. Seems surely she will also love the speaker forever as well, .....held in the arms of HIS enduring love.

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