Thursday, September 24, 2009

Always Will Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breath lost

Mind shot
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Char Pattrick
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Chitra - 29 September 2009

love and its side effects...an intense write..well done

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Paige Derogatis 26 September 2009

Beautiful and intense It shows how painful love can be on both the heart and mind.

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Tai Chi Italy 24 September 2009

So much for my early night! lol I just had to come back and read more of your fine poetry and I am glad I did. Another stunningly beautiful expression of your heart. I know how you feel, it gets me that way too, doubt is nights blight on us separated lovers...we just have to glow the doubt away...and I mean glow! in the light of the lover that we know' always will be close. Catch you on the morrows flight filled wings Tai, definitely going to lara croft land!

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