Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Always Wanting More Comments

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Feeling tired of living in this world, wanting more from
this life.

Going after interesting things through poetry, hoping to
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2015

Move along style of poetry...........I liked it.........Thanks for sharing, always joy to read your poems.

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Daniel Brick 08 September 2015

This poem was written in a wistful mood. It has the quality of taking a deep breath and then slowly exhaling it. Such a poem, such a mood, such a breathing won't change anything in the (so-called) real world, but it puts us in touch with the interior world, if only for a brief restorative moment, and then we can return to (what else?) the reality of ALWAYS WANTING MORE. I'm describing what this poem did for me. It is a small blessing received in the middle of the day (11am) , and gives a nudge forward for the rest of this day. Thanks much, RoseAnn!

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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