Wednesday, September 2, 2020

Always Life Renewal Seeks Comments

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transformation is manifest
seasonal or life shattering
but always life renewal seeks
the warmth of the earth
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Terence George Craddock
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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 September 2020

Good one Sir and very true. My suggest that your title " always renewal life seeks" appears in every verse in the same place will help to gel the poem and propel it forward reminding the reader of the main point of the poem. My 2 cents

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