Good one Sir and very true. My suggest that your title " always renewal life seeks" appears in every verse in the same place will help to gel the poem and propel it forward reminding the reader of the main point of the poem. My 2 cents
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Good one Sir and very true. My suggest that your title " always renewal life seeks" appears in every verse in the same place will help to gel the poem and propel it forward reminding the reader of the main point of the poem. My 2 cents