Saturday, May 30, 2009

Always In The Night Comments

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(A haiku)

Always in the night
it wells up from depths unplumbed -
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Rory Hudson
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Gert Strydom 12 June 2009

Written powerfully with a lot of care.

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Stephen Stirk 08 June 2009

Again another great haiku. Night often brings out the worst feelings in us. Sometime you wish for sleep just get rid of them. Best Steve

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A powerful haiku. Night seems to draw sorrow right in the the psyche of a person and the imagery of 'depths unplumbed, this flood of sorrow' is excellent. 10 Karin Ånderson

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 01 June 2009

Lovely! 'In the evenings, it comes back Comes back tip-toeing You are never alone The angel of sorrow pays you a visit' Lovely write.

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