The tears that fell
From your lonely eyes
Evidence of your extreme fear
And sadness
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What a great poem! It makes me sad and happy all at once! Thank you ever so much for sharing!
God is the lone Shelter after this life.. HE only decides how and when. A well written poem full of sentiments rich 10+
Man proposes, God disposes.....so true. Having read this heart wrenching poem, I turned very sad, since the reader feels what is said in this very touching poem. Heaviest emotions have I undergone, dear great poetess. So saddest have I become. May that person rest in peace. Whatever God's way may be, we must always be grateful to Him. Most touching poem I ever read. Magnificently worded. Sublimest composed, created brilliantly.
Shows deep empathy iwhen you captured the emotions of a departing soul. Very well written.
Though I tasted a different heaven By being with you With Him There will be no iota of pain.. This farewell speech by a departing soul is emotion packed and love filled! Though sad to take leave of the dear ones, she/he knows that she/he will be safe in the loving presence of God where there won't be an iota of pain! A beautiful poem. A 10
Ever so deeply heart moving! .. Ever such beautiful heart and soul! .. Thank you for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .......................+++++
Rose Marie, this is most certainly a real tear-jerker! Thank you for penning this wonderful gem, and sharing!
But no one Could ever Ever conquer The Book of Life.. How true and well said, death is as certain as is life. But death liberates.
I prayed to Almighty God To give me an ample time To say a proper goodbye But my body did not cooperate It was ready to go. Storms of emotion...very powerful write.... thanks
I will be watching over you Every single moment The spirit always watches and guards their dear and near ones. A beautiful, emotional poem.
A heart wrenching poem. Life's end is always easier when true love is there to offer comfort. Always be thankful for love. Thank you Marie
beautiful poetic expression- I know God Will make everything right for me Though I tasted a different heaven /// insightful writings
Powerful! It rang with truth as if the author had indeed died and was communicating his feelings bout what he had suffered and took comfort from.Your poetry often shows this depth of understanding and compassion! Excellence in talent, heart and soul. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
A touching poem, wet eyes read it and emotional heart felt it.
The truth, the ultimate departure on a long journey, an unknown journey which is taken all alone, You displayed a great courage with some sense of pride to accept the death while still alive. I liked the way you wrote this poem.100/10.
A tearjerker poem, Ate Rose.....................10+++++++++++++++++++
Brilliantly written, beautiful and profound! Thank you for sharing this! This poem is a great reminder that God is good an faithful forever!