I thought of creating something new
As mind was upset with little place for few
Ideas to let in and invade vacant place
I had applied break for their chase
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good job Nikki Myobb24 minutes ago you def have talent... I love the use of ur vocabulary very talented Comment 0 Good
I liked the tempo and the style of your syntax Lauren Brennan21 minutes ago I liked the opening lines and thought it was clever to write about writing. I thought that there was a disconnect between the beginning of the poem and the last several stanzas. Comment +1 okay poem ...
Tom P.23 minutes ago This was an okay poem. It sounded as though English is not your primary language, which is okay. But that is a detraction in poetry, unfortunately. Comment +1 ... ...
I thought of creating something new As mind was upset with little place for few
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