Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, November 20, 2013

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I thought of creating something new
As mind was upset with little place for few
Ideas to let in and invade vacant place
I had applied break for their chase
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

Maricela Ramírez likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

good job Nikki Myobb24 minutes ago you def have talent... I love the use of ur vocabulary very talented Comment 0 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

Scoop D'Aulbee25 minutes ago Solid expression

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

I liked the tempo and the style of your syntax Lauren Brennan21 minutes ago I liked the opening lines and thought it was clever to write about writing. I thought that there was a disconnect between the beginning of the poem and the last several stanzas. Comment +1 okay poem ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

Tom P.23 minutes ago This was an okay poem. It sounded as though English is not your primary language, which is okay. But that is a detraction in poetry, unfortunately. Comment +1 ... ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

CrimsonBlood27825 minutes agonice one ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2013

I thought of creating something new As mind was upset with little place for few

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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