Always And Forever Comments

Until my life will reach the end of the string. love that line :) i want to give you my honest opinion and everyone has different opinions, but i hope u can take with a pinch of salt. Ill try make it a constructive criticism :) i think there is alot of potential in your writing however it would be nice to read and feel imagery and metaphors from it as i think that shows more of a skill. please dont hesitate to read any of mine and let me know what you honestly think. :) thanx

Well-written and intensity of emotions woven effectively in the free verses.10+++++