Sunday, August 3, 2008

Always And Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its the phrase we often used
When I explained you and me
Its a sentence i meant so true
Every breathe i used to be
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Joe Doti
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Marilyn Lott 03 August 2008

Love can be so difficult, ups and downs that are so painful at times but enough good that we just hang in there. You put this very well A 10! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Jilted Butterfly 03 August 2008

some strong emotions there, joe. the 'take down the wall' line is beautiful - very moving...

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Chris Newlash 03 August 2008

Great one read some of my poem maybe you'll like them!

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