Saturday, October 27, 2007

Always And Forever-07 Comments

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A while after we got together
Around the time we first said
Our 'I Love You's'
I went to a tree where i carved
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 March 2008

the loss and gain of love written so well.............

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Justine Keaton 10 November 2007

If it's meant to be it will happen, they say patience is a vitue even though sometimes it's hard to do. If it's true and real it will be worth the wait. ~Justine~

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Angel Ofdarkness 09 November 2007

I love this it is one of the most bitter sweet things i've ever read. I'd give it 10 stars love, Angel

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If love is meant to be, it will be. I like the recognition of the possibilities both of permanence and of transcience in this piece. In the meantime.... have fun! t x

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Jona`e Levett 03 November 2007

i like this poem! this one is really good. i love the carving in the tree alot

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Anita Blake 29 October 2007

hey really great write :) full of emotion.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 28 October 2007

Aaww, that's so sad. men can be such jerks sometimes. I hope you find a guy who'll treat you better soon: -)

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Brian Mills 27 October 2007

very loving and sad story gurlie......beautifully written tho....thnx for sharing dear friend....i too have done a similiar jesture with 'my love'....this write of yours brings back alot of beautiful memories for me! ! thanx for reminding me of this dear.....keep em comming! ! ! (10) Brian~

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