Friday, April 10, 2009

Always Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have always loved the sun
Light caress on skin
I have always loved the sun
Leaves float soft on wind
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Timothy Weiermann
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 April 2009

There is really not much to this. The reader comes away from this asking why the writer didn't give the reader more to think about. Not in terms of guessing what the writer is saying, but just in terms of saying something interesting. So, There really is nothing much to review here. Very little substance. GW62

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