Sunday, October 7, 2012

Always Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are Always dark days
But, There is Always a way out
There is Always someone
Always willing to help
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Lyn Paul
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 February 2021

Nice. 'Alone But Not Lonely'

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Riza Braholli 03 July 2018

Yes I will remember always... always yhank you for this poem.. dr. riza

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2017

Always and Now Are valuable words Always you will be loved And Now you are loved So Always remember To Always love... very nice dictum. It is a marvellous poem on life, hope and love espicially based on two words like always and now. Amusing diction. Many thanks dear Lyn Paul for posting such a gem....10

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Melvina Germain 21 October 2015

This is so true, a guiding light awaits and helps each time we only need to acknowledge it and give thanks.

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Maria Gonzalez 26 July 2015

Beautiful and reasssuring

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Allotey Abossey 06 June 2015

There shall no temptation come to you that I will not provide a way of escape. No matter what, there's a way out. God bless you

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Mary Forrester 27 May 2014

Enjoyed your poem Lyn, Great words of inspiration.

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Ken E Hall 02 March 2014

Wise words of comfort if feelings of blue we have to win over I'll just read this poem by Lyn thanks for the uplift...regards

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Heather Wilkins 06 October 2013

when one is down reading your poem will lift them up. good wok enjoyed

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Sandra Feldman 14 July 2013

I also love the very optimistic message that this poem has, if you're feeling blue, you will soon change colors after reading and maybe see life as La Vie en Rose

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Sandra Feldman 14 July 2013

I will Always remember your poem and I will remember to always, love even in the saddest and loneliest moments.Your interweaving and repetition of the word Always is masterfully done, very good handeling of form and language, thank you for this lovely experience

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 February 2013

I will ALWAYS think of this poem of yours which is creditable! !

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Unwritten Soul 10 October 2012

The poem was filled with the lightest ink to float when we sink, the shine when we in dark...i like the things you channeled here...a soul immersed poem_Soul

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Aung Si 08 October 2012

Well penning here..so great and honest. i agree with your fragrant words

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Hans Vr 07 October 2012

Wow, this is beautiful, I always thought that always never existed :) but you convince me otherwise. Excellent poem.

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