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a sweet lovley write. well done

Needing love in life is alright as is wanting to be together with someone you care about. This is good - I like it. It expresses a need that all of us share at one time or another.

love gives birth to poetry, , ..history says

this one is really sweet... i felt this feeling and this is ugly to be away from the person u love

I feel here a muscial sadness in these lines for your love! ! ! A g'd poem indeed!