Alveolar Osteitis. Comments

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I find this a very vicious poem Mary, perhaps the most vicious that I have ever read. That you provoke such a reaction is all credit to your skills. I don't thing I need go on about style and that. I will only end up repeating myself. Suffice to say that this is brilliant. The title being a great one. Titles are important!

I very much like the imagery in this poem, particularly in the 2nd,3rd, and final stanzas.