Friday, May 17, 2019

Alullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! My sweet baby, come
Come and lay on my lap
Close your leaking eyes
And sleep, sleep well on my lap.
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sekharan pookkat
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Unwritten Soul 25 July 2019

To have big heart to call someone a friend but one not accepting it is not the ending of humanity, but i believe humanity will turn your 'friend' to believe you are a true one, a true friend...beautiful poem :)

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A very sweet poem, a lullaby that will make any baby go to sleep with sweet dreams. A poem with rhythmic melody that i enjoyed reading..

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 May 2019

thanks fo your encouraging words- please read other poems too

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 May 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Sekharan pookkat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 May 2019

thank you ery much- sure I will

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Valsa George 21 May 2019

This is a beautiful lullaby, so tuneful and full of warm feelings of love! This will be relished by any baby! A full 10!

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Jennifer Birchall 19 May 2019

You composed a wonderful lullaby dear Sekharan.

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Bharati Nayak 19 May 2019

A lovely lullaby- -wonderfully woven words- -Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 May 2019

Hello Green rose I am in my BLUE for not reading u which is ur due u 2222222222222 so dooooo

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Beena Antony 18 May 2019

So great to see how differently you express your love...feelings.

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Kostas Lagos 18 May 2019

A fantastic lullaby!

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Rahman Henry 18 May 2019

Simply the wonerful one. Thanks to share.

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Every stanza is beautiful...... thanks////////////10000000+++++++

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Oh! My baby Caccabis, come Come and sleep my partridge-eyed baby Close your eyes and sleep well Sleep well with your dreams

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Oh! My sweet Chenab, come Come and unwary your chaplet Weave your crotchet from the dale And dangle with you in your Ducky

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Oh! My beauty queen, come Come and hear my crotchet Stroke your bleeding mind And sleep, sleep well under full moon

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Oh! My naughty baby, come Come and listen the songs Dribble your swinging soul And sleep, sleep well on my chariot

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Oh! My sweet heart, come Come and hear the dulcet Fill your throbbing heart And sleep, sleep well on my swing

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Oh! My sweet baby, come Come and lay on my lap Close your leaking eyes And sleep, sleep well on my lap... ....

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 May 2019

thanks prabir

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