Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Although He Seems Divided... Comments

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In a dark and dirty place-
He holds his little sermons,
Drinks his cans of alcohol,
And preaches to the vermon.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Rema Prasanna 01 July 2008

Although he seems divided- God keeps his Heart so tidy... God always does that.. This is a very good write. Kyle. Rema

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Tai Chi Italy 01 July 2008

Love the third stanza and your descriptions of him are so vivid I could almost smell him Kyle! Phew....lol Tai

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 01 July 2008

Easy to imagine things after reading this poem. Good write!

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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