Saturday, February 24, 2018

Altar For The Deceased(Shape Poem) Comments

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On this day for commemorating, few forget the tears,
the heart-broken moments, when the dear ones left
for the other world, in spite of love, in spite of all...
They have to go, back to the dust,
...
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Akhtar Jawad 30 May 2018

The Tomb-Sweeping Day, in memory of the beloved ones who have departed for the other world. Dear Madam, your poem brought images of those dear ones who are now sleeping in their graves, may their souls rest in peace!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 March 2018

In spite of love, in spite of all...They have to go, back to the dust...........The offerings of wine, food and fruits are tokens of respect You have unfolded the naked truth! The last line is powerful! Appreciated!

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 March 2018

they seem lifted in their spirit. They turned into sacred tablets, their photos hovered by incense.... a eulogy to the dead..f praising them and seeing them as if in a vision in the world of heaven and God. thank you for ur faith..... tony

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