Monday, April 15, 2019

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He knew he could not win this game,
It's not for him what we call the fame,
The stars never wrote his name,
He's at all not shy, yes no shame,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 26 April 2019

The brownie is a dancer, he dances in his words and lines and the way he dances is attractive and touching.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 April 2019

I have been running since the day I was born but yet am not a marathoner I ran distances small coz I am not lame but slow tactless not knowing how the track does go but run I will of course you know now over the hill Kick me someone quickly

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 April 2019

Another clever poem, Sir Akhtar. Beautifully crafted and insightful. Sometimes fame is given to us without much effort invested. Those who do the dirty work are insignificant

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