Sunday, October 26, 2008

Alright Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

You entertain me

with your smile
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Fay Slimm 30 October 2008

A deep and telling piece of prose, and keeps us guessing with your usual intrigue Jim, but slowly we try to work through the words and maybe guess at the subject who is obviously meaningful to you as the writer. A slow, deliberate piece with a hint of mystery which always attracts. Tender too. - - - wishes from Fay.

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