Friday, March 25, 2016

Alright Comments

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You left me in the night,
turned down every light,
walked away far from sight,
but still am alright.
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lucas mmaduabuchi
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Hans Vr 16 April 2016

Life is not easy, but it is beautiful. The forgiveness part of the poem gives an extra touch of wisdom to it. I like the rhymes, free and flowing well. Very well written poem; inspiring!

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Anzelyne Shideshe 29 March 2016

Humility with lots of Love Are vividly expressed.I can relate to it.keep writing.

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