Friday, November 7, 2008

Already Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clutching your name
Near to my heart
It’s so hard to forget
The way your eyes
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Jennifer Sollmann
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Kaylee Questionable 10 November 2008

Its a very very good poem you can feel the emotion. My favorite part was: 'Empty abyss greets it' Keep writing Yo!

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*Trusting You* 09 November 2008

I search your eyes frantically At a loss, no clue what to do I love those lines. good poem. *Purkey Girl*

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Stefan Van Pinxteren 08 November 2008

Really good poem It touched me very good keep on writting. :)

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Kevin Eaglesfield 07 November 2008

I agree with Raj.Beautiful.The shock of a mirror becoming a black hole.Kev x

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Raj Arumugam 07 November 2008

A lovely poem, Jennifer - it captures so genuinely the pain of love...the line: How far did you go? is dramtic and powerful....

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