Clutching your name
Near to my heart
It’s so hard to forget
The way your eyes
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I search your eyes frantically At a loss, no clue what to do I love those lines. good poem. *Purkey Girl*
Really good poem It touched me very good keep on writting. :)
I agree with Raj.Beautiful.The shock of a mirror becoming a black hole.Kev x
A lovely poem, Jennifer - it captures so genuinely the pain of love...the line: How far did you go? is dramtic and powerful....
Its a very very good poem you can feel the emotion. My favorite part was: 'Empty abyss greets it' Keep writing Yo!