Sunday, June 19, 2011
Already Ate All The Pills... Comments
Rating: ★5.0
they come and they hit you with their bats
they try to make you one of their lads
you cry out loud but cry doesn't make them sad
you dry out your cry but you cant and that makes you mad
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
19 June 2011
Good poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Very well conceived. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.
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7/20/2025 2:33:44 AM # 1.0.0
seems like you have much 'angst' to share the 'they' in your poem makes your life miserable but it is good that you can express yourself well