Friday, October 30, 2015

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That boy was with me with sheer disgust
To hear him with patience was for me must
He ignored his studies and family needed money
His father scolded, asked him to work, very bluntly
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Suhail Kakorvi
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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2015

Thanks for your effort, inspiration and guidance that the boy got a new lease of life.It is heartening to listen such good works that really change the course of life in positive direction.

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Suhail Kakorvi 31 October 2015

Thanks Bharti Nayak ji for your valuable comment being encouraged by the pearls of your words I added couple of lines therein to make things more vivid please go though thanks again

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 October 2015

Horrifying experience through which the boy, most probably a child labor had to face for earning pittance. The owner having main target of currency must be cruel. Nice write.8 points.

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Suhail Kakorvi 31 October 2015

Ratnakar Mandik ji Yes it is about what you got.Apart from that I tried to manifest the importance of Education therein.Thanks for appreciation.

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