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I've read it quickly but I'll agree with dissatisfied exmember. This is not rubbish, far from it. Amicalement votre, R.

Andrew this is definely NOT rubbish. How dare he say that. How rude! I would usggest that you adjust the lines so that it flows better. Don't change a word, just place the lines so that it flows for the reader eg.

Just waiting to be sung, languidly but expressively, by Noel Coward... try it! Then the interior rhythms really emerge. Did you intend it as a lyric?