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Amazing poem brilliantly put and a great read.

Clever yet charming poem! Oddly enough, I was just doing some research about bats since I've been observing them flying in the evenings over my lake cabin.

Really cute poem, I enjoyed it a lot!

A fun exercise! I am reading this because it appeared on Bri's Showcase. Thanks for posting!

Xcept (i think P-H's) messing up some spacing in a couple of places, this is visually appealing, a bit like a bat's fluttering flight path. maybe use " Grubs" , not " Grub" ? one definition of " zingers" : " A sudden shock, revelation, or turn of events." i'd change your last 2 periods to 2 commas. bri :) to MyPoemList and maybe to share.

well done..from A to Z you have created an amazing strange poem with poetic behaviour of Predators, it is unique form, thanks for sharing 10/10