Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Alpha Wolf Of The Pack Comments

Rating: 4.5

As twilight breaks
She awakes from her sleep
She steps from the den
With four of her young
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Britney Hogue
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Very refreshing with an easy sweet flow. Thanks for sharing.

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 February 2009

This is fairly straight forward as a poem. No diversions or lingering questions. I hope the writer gets to read my poem called THE HUNTER. She may like that. Overall, this is about average as poems go. There were only a few rhymes and very little rhythm. GW62

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