Thursday, December 3, 2009

Alpha Of The Darkness Comments

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He is the alpha wolf
Dangerous to my soul
He is seeping darkness
yet i need him more and more
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vanessa feliciano
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nature 360 15 January 2010

Line seven. 'And yet i follow you' should read 'And yet I follow him' True it is the intense feeling in ones heart that makes one write; but it is also ones nature that helps develop this poetic skill. Your basics of viewing life are very strong come what may. Congrats.

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Joseph Poewhit 03 December 2009

Has an intense under story to it

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