Monday, November 19, 2012

Alpha And Omega Comments

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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2018

Trickles from mountain tops Travelling miles, swell into rivers Merging finally with the silent seas......fantastic expression, beautiful poem.

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Dutendra Chamling 30 November 2015

Alpha & Omega is a beautiful poem! Western philosophy takes Alpha (α) & omega (ω) as birth & death respectively. Valsa George! You have written about life too here. It's wonderful work.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 March 2015

Silent Sea, the final destination, a beautiful three liner..................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 August 2014

Succinct but sweet and the truth so finely weaved with alpha and omega.......Valsa.....simply brilliant.........

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 24 December 2012

Well painted picture in a form of poetry, excellent art

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Prasanna Kumari 04 December 2012

the title is more beautiful than the poem and the poem brings the feeling that psychic being is a part of cosmic being....

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Anita Sehgal 03 December 2012

very beautiful..liked it!

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Hans Vr 30 November 2012

very short but beautiful One sees the drops gather into a bigger and bigger entity

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Ken E Hall 25 November 2012

Water on its cycle of life for us yes from a trickle a perfect Haiku explanation indeed...regards

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Kee Thampi 23 November 2012

cloud clot and into the sea

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 November 2012

The trickles are your thoughts, the rivers are the formation of words and finally the sea is your poem.! Ha! Ha! How admirable a Haiku! I loved the depth of meaning.Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Valerie Dohren 21 November 2012

Beautiful and with such a very deep meaning, the silent sea being our ultimate destination.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 November 2012

short, but effective, though the journey is very long! well written!

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Babatunde Aremu 19 November 2012

Nature at its best. Great poem, I like it

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