Along With The Time - Part I Comments
Hear me breeze, don't blow a gale
Clouds, don't pour in without bail
Stream don't cast a mighty flow
Forgive human forgetfulness.
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Good job. very nicely described the change of seasons and its beauty
The change of seasons and its beauty is depicted in this poem. Good one.
I could visualise the change in seasons through your poem. Nicely written
So much beauty and treasure nature holds for us.But man forgets nature's grace and exploits the treasure unabashedly.Oh Nature, forgive man's folly and his forgetfulness. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
Thank you very much for the appreciating words. Unless man stops reckless exploitation nature will revenge with its full might which poor man will not be able to withstand
Thank you Smt.Bharati Nayak. Painful injuries sustained by over exploitation will not be tolerated by the nature. It will retort one day which will be hard to withstand
Hear me breeze, don't blow a gale Clouds, don't pour in without bail Stream don't cast a mighty flow Forgive human forgetfulness. The breeze strolled whispering tales The clouds hastened with kisses for hills The stream went humming towards the falls The time said, pace with me, I did. - - - - - - What a beautiful write about seasons.
Lovely poem with great expressions. Time said ‘peace with me’ I did......thanks for sharing.
Thank you Savithaji for the encouraging words
A poem with brilliant expression. let me cite some lines...The breeze strolled whispering tales The clouds hastened with kisses for hills The stream went humming towards the falls The time said, pace with me, I did. this is really a beautiful poem.10
Good morning Kumaramaniji. I thought why should not I write about environmental hazards and place before the international community for awareness. This is the first part. The next part is also ready and thus it will go on. Thank you for the heart felt appreciation
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Loved this beautiful poem loaded with imagery. Top score