Sunday, April 30, 2017

Along The Road To Bonbien Comments

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The gravel spits 'neath the cumbersome wheels
.....Where pebbles are unearthed - once of virgin soil
Sharpened curves that tease ones eyes- -
..........As the engines oil - begins to boil.
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 30 April 2017

Tried to edit the last line and insert the word travels- as in when all life's travels are done! ! Kept checking - hasn't corrected yet. Sorry everyone!

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Theodora Onken 30 April 2017

Tried to edit last line - where travels was supposed to be but isn't. Supposed to read when all life's travels are done! !

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