Along The Path Comments
I wish I could have eased your pain
as once we walked along the path
that led along a grassy ridge
and round the hill, and back again.
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this is quite an astonishingly moving poem! The rhyme and rhythm are not forced. They fit the mood perfectly. Your word choices also match the mood and meaning. Very well done!
this is a beautiful poem.. 'your eyes were moist with fading dreams' i absolutely love that line 10
Very pleasant and beautiful poem...along with a systematic structure...nice one
Awe so much to think about! i have been there too at a place in bygone days.life is full of memories for us all.Thanks for sharing
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7/20/2025 7:35:33 AM # 1.0.0
So wonderfully written and moving poem..I agree with Lillian on rhyme and rhythm it posseses. Thanks for sharing. A.