Tuesday, December 31, 2002

Along The Field As We Came By Comments

Rating: 3.1

ALONG the field as we came by
A year ago, my love and I,
The aspen over stile and stone
Was talking to itself alone.
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Alfred Edward Housman
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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 August 2024

THREE: It's a poignant meditation on how time changes relationships and the inevitability of moving on after loss.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 August 2024

TWO: It describes a scene where the speaker and his beloved walk through a field, with the aspen trees seemingly predicting the woman's eventual death and the speaker's future love with another.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 August 2024

ONE: The poem is about the transience of human life and the inevitability of death. The poem reflects on the fleeting nature of love and the certainty of loss.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 August 2024

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen again by Poem Hunter and Team as The Classic Poem Of The Day. TOP Marks again.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 August 2024

A great read. A tree is the silent witness of a life's journey. Amazing imagery.

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Savita Tyagi 20 June 2024

A beautiful read of loving and tender emotions. a tinge of sadness that always follows the mortal life like a shadow.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 April 2024

against the backdrop of nature's constancy. Truly most beautiful poem I have read this morn. Highest mark for this thought-provoking poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 April 2024

Summed up, "Along the Field as We Came By" portrays love's fleeting beauty, the inexorable march of time, and the ache of lost connections. It invites readers to contemplate love's fragility

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Koffi B Sossou 21 April 2024

I thought I was reading Emily Dickinson. This is a very deep poem. Well-crafted with a rain of sorrow.

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Sagnik Chakraborty 26 September 2014

A beautiful masterpiece on the regular nature of change, sorrow, parting and eventually death seen from an everyday perspective. The poems of Housman stand out because of their lovely innate understatement.

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Michelle Claus 06 July 2014

Trees bear witness to our unfolding story.

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Paul Reed 06 July 2014

wonderful rhythm and simplicity

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A beautiful poem with such beautiful rhyme.

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Love poem with beautiful words.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 06 July 2013

Very nice poem with beautiful rhymes.

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Raabia Tabassum 06 July 2013

Great poem! I love the way you have come up with the theme.

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Joseph Poewhit 06 July 2010

Housman, capturing the romance of love and the mortal fate of death, playing it's hand. In a way saying, life is short, who knows what the next heart beat will bring, in the field of love.

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Ramesh T A 06 July 2010

What kind of love is this? Are they really loving each other? Are they both have affairs with other ones each? Aspen tree only knows!

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Joey Valenzuela 06 July 2010

this poem has something to do with the idea of karma and prophesies....and also, the idea that history repeats itself........ in the first stanza, there is the scene of lovers passing along the field, and there they heard the aspen tree talking himself about 'these [people, probably] that kiss and pass' the tree's quotation somewhat presents a prophesy of what's about to happen, probably... But she shall lie with earth above, >>>>>>>>>>in this lines the tree prophesied the And he beside another love>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>girl to die, and the man to have >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>another girl in the beggining of the second stanza, the prophesy was confirmed to have happened..... And sure enough beneath the tree There walks another love with me on the other hand, in the middle part of stanza two, there again is the prophesizing of the aspen tree, but this time it was told to the girl.... And overhead the aspen heaves Its rainy-sounding silver leaves; And I spell nothing in their stir, But now perhaps they speak to her, and the prophesy then happened (just like the first stanza a lover would die, probably) And plain for her to understand They talk about a time at hand When I shall sleep with clover clad, And she beside another lad. the idea of karma was presented when the situation that the first girl was into happened to the man........

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Michael Harmon 06 July 2009

Meticulously crafted, as are all of Housman's. The PH biography notes: '...he argued that poetry should appeal to emotions rather than to the intellect...' True enough. However, as with all poets who make such statements (i.e. Sydney, Wordsworth) , it may appeal to the 'emotions', but it was crafted by 'emotions' AND 'intellect'. :)

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