Thursday, July 8, 2021

Along The Fallen Path Comments

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Me walking with my shadow
along the fallen path
evenly uneven on fire all the way
hand in hand exchanging words
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DASHARATH NAIK
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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

A very impressive way of *An Indian game of singing song in turn. Best end rhymed stanzas.I have read and enjoyed very much this excellent Song poem

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