Friday, October 10, 2014

Along Some Time. Comments

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I did not know how to walk, how to reach home
i thought about sinking my head in my pillow
and cry, cry to get out the overdosed amount of salt, i
cannot bear the turbulent sea in my hidden nature.
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Amina Allaf
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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2014

Time is the best healer, a nice write, I liked it. But you think you should have added a poet's note to enable the reader to understand this poem in a better way.

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