Alone With Myself Comments
Alone with myself
Today I've looked at myself,
And seen that I'm someone else.
A shrunken and wrinkled ELF
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Very fascinating poem and with such humour and honesty worded. Amazing, dear Valentin! Would you also read few of my poems? Thank you and I have truly enjoyed this gorgeous poem full of self satire
Dear Sylvia, thank you so much for your comment, I'm sorry for the delay in responding. I was about to retire from the PH. Advertising annoyed me all the time. But today I got a message from RN that there are comments on my page and I decided to look in and respond. I will definitely visit you.
The better half of my life's gone, I stay between twilight and dawn. Nicely written piece and your wording was great. I enjoyed this..! pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my site too poemtheart thank you.. :)
Thank you, dear Sarah, for your comment. I am going to see your page.
Thank you, dear Sarah, for the comment. I am going to see your page.
loneliness there is! alone with self but not alone there takes birth another tone me with me crowded twin entity! ! !
Thank you very much, dear Mahtab for your comment. Thank you very much, dear Mahtab for your comment. You may not be as alone with me, as I am alone with myself. Not always, sometimes. :)
Thank you, dear Mahtab for your comment. You may not be as alone with me, as I am alone with myself. Not always, sometimes. :)
Thank you, dear Dr. Tony. I am grateful to you for your kind words. Yes, we are all in the hands of the Almighty God.
The better half of my life's gone I stay between twilight and dawn. All seems gone and nothing left, I'm a loser, my Sun bereft. my earthly life burns down........from your poet's notes i understand your words in the poem much better........yes our life will end. But we have lived a life. that life is good and we have done a lot of good....... we shall offer our life into the hands of the loving and eternal father. Tony
A vivid portrayal of loneliness. Beautifully written with great imagery. May God keep you safe always.
A heart touching portrayal of loneliness.We all are mortal beings and go through natural process of aging and allied ailments.It is quite natural to feel depressed.May God keep you in good health. Congratulations for being selected Poet of the Day!
Thank you very much for your explicit and valuable comment. I'm pleased to hear that.
At the outset accept my hearty congratulations on your poem being featured in Member's POTD. May Almighty keep you hale and healthy. It is but natural to feel alone when we are down with health issues. A heartfelt poem.10++
Thank you, dear Mohammed, for such a nice comment and congratulations on POTD. Your words are honey to drink, if I may say so and be rightly understood.
Thanks, Carl, for your comment and congratulations. I’m pleased to hear that..
A touching prizewinning poem, Valentin. Congrats for being selected...10++++++++++++++
Congratulations my dear poet.. Valentin, , , , , , , , , , , i think i was one of the first to comment on this poem of yours. i am so happy that it has become POD today. Congrats! ! again. tony
Regrets and unrealized hopes and dreams. Hopelessness, given up and feeling of defeated. Such a mixture of strong feelings. Don't loose your faith in a helping hand. We are all lonely islands in the ocean of life. Hang in there. Congrats for POD.
Thanks, Amir. I will fight until I am completely broken and defeated. We all walk under God.
What a dark night - still and void. despair, deep and painful All illusions and hopes destroyed.
Hang in there, Valentin. Sometimes being alone with yourself is better than having the company of certain other people! Being alone also gives you the chance to come up with new poems. Your poem is touching. Keep listening to that voice that says 'not yet'. Don't be tempted to decide on your own that it's time. Let God decide.
Thank you very much, dear Coelho, for your wonderful comment. I completely agree with you. We are in the hands of God. It is Him to decide our fate.
'I'm hearing nothing, but silence, ' You have your poetic gift keep using it, my friend in verse.
Thank you, Adrian, for your kind words. You inspire me to further feats.
A sad reality write from the heart? Be positive Valentin your words shall always show your masterful art! .........best wishes.
Thank you, dear Tom, for your kind words and encouragement. With best wishes,
I'm hearing nothing, but silence! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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7/18/2025 5:52:33 AM # 1.0.0
Positive thoughts is one misses out in times of anxiety and illness. Good company is what one needs in old age.
Thank you very much, dear Sir. I agree with you. A friend in need is a friend indeed.