Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Alone With My Thoughts Comments

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Alone, deep inside my head;
Pushing me to the brink of death.
My thoughts alone are crushing me;
Why doesn't anyone see the pain I bring.
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Patricia Gillaspy
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Chris Blazo 05 October 2012

The past is part of you, no matter how good or bad. I really liked this passionate write.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 25 September 2012

Inside our heads is where we are the strongest.If we do not give the strength a direction, it becomes a poison that weighs us down and kill us, slowly and silently. Whatever the situation is, listen carefully to yourself, your thoughts I mean. We all know what is best for us deep within our thoughts, we just usually need someone to direct us and affirm that we are thinking the right thing. I hope you find relief from whatever battle you are fighting with your thoughts. And by the way, your poetic skill with which you wrote this is exceptional, do keep up the good work.

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