Monday, September 19, 2011

Alone Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

You stare at me,
Like I'm someone else.
My words have hit
With a force too shrewd.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Suratha Kumar Rout 14 November 2017

You stare at me, Like I'm someone else. My words have hit With a force too shrewd. I promise I am who I was Only moments ago. My name you know well, And my face you have held. Where are you lost? I know we have met before. Have I truly changed? Or do you just refuse, To see me as someone You truly once knew? Really it is a beautiful poem. 10+++++

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Ben Burger 25 October 2011

The poem is beautiful, like most of your work. This one is very good, keep it up

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Elena Sandu 03 October 2011

Dear Stefanie, this poem is not only beautiful but deep! Good questions, I wish to answer with some other wonders: do the people's view change or ours? Do others comes to a change or us? Interesting write, loved it! ! Thank you for share,10

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Whispering Rose 02 October 2011

i love the title and each line...great write...keep up the good work

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Whispering Rose 02 October 2011

i love the title and each line...great write...keep up the good work

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Tanja Bulovic 22 September 2011

I know the feeling... But I could not put it into words. Wonderful.

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 September 2011

My name you know well, And my face you have held. Nice way of expressing it so simply...splendid work

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Lovable Wisdom 21 September 2011

that took me to whole nother place i enjoyed it

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Shadow Girl 21 September 2011

Love this one...things can, change in the blink of an eye. Great write as always xo

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Eric Cockrell 20 September 2011

honest, and powerful emotion!

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Vipins Puthooran 19 September 2011

Wow, , wonderful stefanie... Richness in love and emotions..

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Raj Arumugam 19 September 2011

You capture passion, love and change so well, Stefanie...The poem captures such a wide and rich range of emotions...

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Declan O Reilly 19 September 2011

Beautiful Stef. Too beautiful for analysis. I so enjoy the places you bring my mind to. Your verse will be numbered with the wisest.

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