Saturday, March 26, 2005

Alone She Puffs Comments

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uncertain future

alone she puffs
smoke covers her face
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john tiong chunghoo
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 29 May 2005

Joun U may be right...I sense the similarity in our work! Nobody Knows Her Name...

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David Masters 24 May 2005

Although this poem is quite saddening, there is a sense of hope there. Dark and melancholy, with glimpses of light. I hope she finds her way in the end.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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