Saturday, July 12, 2008

Alone, Once Again … Comments

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When your thoughts glide like a stately swan
in the lake of my emerald memories,
every day, my eyes laced with
silken sleep and chiselled marble dreams
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Bharat Trivedi
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The sadness on this poem touched my heart. A lovely piece. best regards, joan d.h.

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, aryaindia 04 August 2008

A poignant reminder of something that once was, this beautiful melodious painful verse of your becoming alone once again, brought out the tears that stand on the threshold of suffering. Thank you, arya.You write amazingly...arya

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 July 2008

Sooo metaphorical, dramatic....very good imagery. I could feel it. sathya narayana

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